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TSHolden.com - Little Tentus - Transcriptions
Welcome to the oh-so-spoiling transcriptions page. This page holds the transcritions for the first 8 pages of Little Tentus, even though Little Tentus has not been rendered yet.
If you're the type who wants to read ahead and find out what's going to happen, this is the page for you. If you prefer to read the comics as they get finished, please don't read any more of this page.
I've decided to go with a system not unlike that of Oh No Robot, which means that quotes ("example") indicate dialog or inner monolog, double chevrons (<<example>>) indicate sound effects, double brackets indicate description ([[example]]), and double braces indicate meta information such as title and date ({{example}}). Each panel get it's own paragraph of sorts, meaning there will be a blank line between each panel.
So without further ado, here they are!
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Page 01 |
[[Tentus is sitting on the side of a hill, his head in his hands.]]
"Okay Tentus, stay calm."
[[The camer moves closer to Tentus, and the background becomes a bit more focused.]]
"They can't all be gone. You can't be completely alone."
"You're going to be fine, just... stay calm."
[[Close shot of Tentus's head and shoulders.]]
"I'm gonna die, aren't I." |
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Page 02 |
[[full-body shot of Tentus, taking up most of the page.]]
"I didn't think death would be this quiet." |
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Page 03 |
[[Tentus rummages through his bag.]]
"Sigh. No maps, no magic compass, no enchanted books..."
[[Tentus slams the flap of his bag shut.]]
"... And no way to get in touch with anyone I even remotely know."
[[Standing up.]]
"I need to figure out where they've gone. And why." |
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Page 04 |
[[Walking down the hill]].
"Maybe someone else is still here."
"I was only out for a few days... couldn't have been more than a week... could it? It's been so hard to tell with this ridiculous cloud cover."
<<rumble>>
<<Boom!>>
[[Heavy rain begins to fall]]
[[Tentus stops and scowls.]]
"Yep. Definately the worst day ever." |
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Page 05 |
[[Stepping out from a stone overhang.]]
"Not a thing in the infirmary. No patients, no supplies, no mess.""
"They had the time to be thorough when they left."
[[Stepping into an Onodrim house.]]
"Which means it was planned, not a massacre or a sudden evacuation."
[[Shouting aloud with clenched fists.]]
"Why was I left behind!" |
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Page 06 |
[[Tentus hankers downs beside a stone table]]
[[It begins to get darker.]]
[[Getting pretty dark, Tentus is just a profile.]]
[[Tentus points one finger at the plants in the center of the table and one of them begins to glow brightly.]]
<<Fwish!>>
[[The background is now entirely black.]]
[[The plant becomes dim.]]
[[Black.]] |
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Page 07 |
[[Angle shot of Tentus look up at the partially-cleared sky.]]
[[Tentus goes inside and picks up his bag.]]
[[Close shot of Tentus as he leaves the house.]]
[[The shot widens as Tentus walks away, and two eyes appear in the shadows of the house Tentus just exited.]] |
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Page 08 |
[[Tentus peers into a different house.]]
"Still nothing..."
[[Rubbing his forehead.]]
"I am so sick of this nothingness.
"At this point I'd be glad for anything to happen."
<<Snap!>>
[[Tentus whirls around.]]
"Nezbubu. Why do I say these things?" |
Fun times! As usual, if you see any errors or inconsistencies, please email me and I'll look into it.
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